One normal weekend on a Saturday night, my parents were planning on going out. My mom asked, “Are you going to be okay staying home alone?”
I said “Of course, I will be fine.”
She giggled “Okay, love you.”
“Love you too”
My mom and dad left.
I went and sat on the couch, thinking of bad thoughts, about staying home alone. I knew I never liked to stay home alone since I lived in a mansion, and the only reason I told my mom I was okay staying home alone is because I didn’t want a babysitter, that’s for little kids. I suddenly heard the door bell, I was hesitant to open the door, but I did, it was pizza guy from Pizza Hut. I forgot my mom ordered me pizza for dinner.
He asked, “Hello, did u order a large pepperoni pizza?”
“Yes, yes I did.”
The man gave me the pizza, and I gave him the money and the $3 tip.
He said, “Have a good night.”
“You too.”
I took the pizza in the living room, to watch some “South Park” episodes recorded on my TVO and eat some pizza. While I was eating pizza I heard some footsteps up stairs, I almost had heart failure, but I thought to myself that must of just been the cats chasing each other. I then heard more footsteps and they sound very close, I looked back, there was a guy about 6”2 feet, wearing all black and it looked like he had a pistol and a wrench. Instantly he hit me with the wrench on the side of the head, I was knocked unconscious.
I then woke up in the basement tied up on a chair.
The man said “Don’t make a sound or it’s the last thing you will say”
About thirty seconds later I head police sirens, the man ran up the stairs to lock the doors, about five minutes later I heard guns shots, Then I heard footsteps coming down the stairs, I looked it was the police.
The cop said “Are you okay?”
“I don’t think so, I was hit in the head pretty bad.”
“Ambulance is on the way.”
Saying in a trembling way, “Thanks, I don’t know how I could repay you.”
I asked, “How did you know I was in trouble?”
“The neighbors saw a guy break in the window upstairs and then they called us.”
“Well, really I thank you, you saved my life.”
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You set up the suspense of this scene very well! Also, your word choice is getting stronger. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI really liked it. It was very good suspense, I kind of feel the same way, wehn I am home alone at night. Really good job!
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